Pros: I like the contrast between the smooth, shiny latex/vinyl and the rough rock background. This is a good method of showing off the outfit and making its presentation more intense. The model's posture and pose are striking as usual, showing us only what matters for the purpose of the image. The ambient light reveals enough of the background and the dark areas of the outfit to ensure that the viewer can see every detail. The makeup is strong and unique, and complements the model's complexion, without being distracting.

Cons: Position of her hair over her right shoulder; it blurs what should be a strong line between her right arm and the right breast, one of the features this outfit usually deliberately "projects". The camera-mounted flash leaves a distracting shadow behind her, but luckily isn't overpowering. There seems to be an uncontrolled light source which highlights her ankle and left hand to the point of overexposure.

I would suggest using a shorter shutter speed and use a couple softboxes to illuminate everything, This will help in both the overexposed highlights and the harsh, "hugging" shadows. Good work, Toni and Brian.